hillrdavid's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Quest for Coffee pt. 1]

Was that a slenderman?

GoKritz responds:

what slenderman? I didn't put slenderman in my flash

[Dinos Knights Mob Robos]

It's clear that you put a lot of time into this, but I think the reasons that it has a low score are because there is no sound, and because it is more of a slideshow than an animation.

anb1110 responds:

Thamk you for actually leaving a comment unlike the other 300 people and yea i kno Im planning on adding music but i don't kno how i would change that it looks like a slideshow i mean it was my first try maybe ill get better as i progress.

[The office amusements]

Where was the punchline?

When the animation was over I was left wondering, "That was it?" The only joke here can be seen way before it is acted out. I think shorts like this need something that the viewer is not expecting.

[ZombieMurderExplosionDie]

Not very funny

I think the problem is that there don't seem to really be any original ideas in this animation; it's just a bunch of stereotypes stuck into a zombie world.

[Valentine's Day 2009]

I thought it was pretty boring

Sure it was kind of neat but it was so boring and didn't hold my attention at all.

[Pickleman's Breakfast]

Needed different music

I think it would have been better if you had chosen some sort of music other than what you did. The music wouldn't have to be all hardcore or anything, just different.

poxpower responds:

Well that's really specific.

[Will Of the Shinigami]

The voice acting was so bad

One of the guys was all serious, while the other sounded like he was all casual and in a totally different situation. The voice acting for the main guy was the worst. Also, try to not colour everything with gradients. It would be nice to see some actual shading on the people. Aside from that (and the fact that it is anime) I thought it was ok

[Amentia: Origin]

Holy crap introductions?

More than half the movie was just the introduction? How many times do you need to throw your name in there, saying that you've done something? I was very tempted to just close the window. You also don't need to say "Amentia" so many times throughout the movie.

StevoTheWise responds:

One, Amentia was said twice
Two, Stevo is an attention whore, and decided the end credits weren't enough :P
Third, IT IS A SERIES. It will get better, and we will probably not even use the intro for the next episodes.
Forth, I notice you're Canadian, so show some support to Stevo for God's sake! lol

[New Kashinnu Episode 2]

I love the story

It's really well developed.

[Alpha Tournament]

Fight secnes are too long

And if I wanted to watch people fly into the air, I would watch DBZ. I think you should cut back on the flying people.