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Basically a Dragonball Z animation.

BoosterNinja responds:

Right on the ball.

I watched this for the first time about a year ago with no sound on. It was amazing.

BoobMarley responds:

Th-thanks...?

Pretty cool. Did you create the music too? I could tell when it looped the first time around.

kurm1s responds:

yeah, I created it a while ago. Thanks :)

Was that a slenderman?

GoKritz responds:

what slenderman? I didn't put slenderman in my flash

It's clear that you put a lot of time into this, but I think the reasons that it has a low score are because there is no sound, and because it is more of a slideshow than an animation.

anb1110 responds:

Thamk you for actually leaving a comment unlike the other 300 people and yea i kno Im planning on adding music but i don't kno how i would change that it looks like a slideshow i mean it was my first try maybe ill get better as i progress.

Needed different music

I think it would have been better if you had chosen some sort of music other than what you did. The music wouldn't have to be all hardcore or anything, just different.

poxpower responds:

Well that's really specific.

Holy crap introductions?

More than half the movie was just the introduction? How many times do you need to throw your name in there, saying that you've done something? I was very tempted to just close the window. You also don't need to say "Amentia" so many times throughout the movie.

StevoTheWise responds:

One, Amentia was said twice
Two, Stevo is an attention whore, and decided the end credits weren't enough :P
Third, IT IS A SERIES. It will get better, and we will probably not even use the intro for the next episodes.
Forth, I notice you're Canadian, so show some support to Stevo for God's sake! lol

Too much tweening.

The animation was pretty bad, you might wanna try more complex tweens or frame by frame.

DC5-bOi responds:

i agree. i personally hate tweens now. my next submission is gunna be more frame by frame. thanks for the review.

Some good ideas, but bad results.

The voice acting was pretty bad, and so were the drawings in some parts. Try working on that.

madarkwasp responds:

Eh, it was a media project. What can I say?

Ehh.....

It was not really that great. It lacks wayy to much. It looks to me that you are just looking off of other DBZ pics and then drawing them with a few different aspects. If so, you should instead study how to draw anatomy and facial features. Trust me, your ability to draw will greatly increase, I used to copy from DBZ pics myself.... (this is assuming you actually did copy from them). Also, the story is bland and lacking. You need to come up with something original and not just copy what has already happened on the show.

Majin-Ryan responds:

Thanks for the review, but Majin Vegetto hasnt happened at all in the show:P

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